Melbourne the queen city standing firm
with its architecture glory, old world charm.
From vibrant skyline on Yarra river
to rising excitements of sports-fever.
A quiet drive through the Great Ocean Road
will clear your mind and take all load.
Be it scuba dive, surfing or penguin parade,
wildlife & hiking trails are awesome, don't get afraid.
Nature's wonder, the Campbell rock formation
a city tram ride will satisfy your passion.
Exotic beaches and Melbourne cricket ground
an excellent city to walk around
Exciting platters and a drink in pub, wow!!
It's your time to visit Melbourne NOW!
-By Debopam Banerjee
This is my entry for the " It's your time to visit Melbourne NOW " contest in IndiBlogger
You do have an inclination for poetry... which seems untutored right now. Why don't you try the syllabic form for a change? Decide on a number of syllables for a line and have lines with the same number of syllables... with rhymes thrown in, if possible.
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Arvind Passey
www.passey.info
Thank you for your kind suggestion. Indeed I am new to poetry. I will try my best. Thank you again.
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